tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13914521.post114585004113112686..comments2012-06-16T07:45:44.779-05:00Comments on Fallout: Poem for a Sunday nighthearmysonghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16066328214266073613noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13914521.post-1145928650833885332006-04-24T20:30:00.000-05:002006-04-24T20:30:00.000-05:00Very very nice piece.My particular favorite lines ...Very very nice piece.<BR/><BR/>My particular favorite lines are<BR/><BR/>"To margarine crackling on toasted bread<BR/>Coloful characters playing on the screen"<BR/><BR/>and <BR/><BR/>"Slamming the door<BR/>One last kiss<BR/>Oops, I forgot…<BR/>Full tummies."<BR/><BR/>Evocative imagery, good emtional impact.<BR/><BR/>I have one fault with the end...You're dance HAS begun. :)<BR/><BR/>And it's a Willhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17514138159494511825noreply@blogger.com